I posted the 1st draft of this story back in January 2012. I never posted the 2nd draft because it really didn’t differ too much from the original. This 3rd draft is the one that I handed in as part of my 3rd and final Storytelling assignment. The reason I’ posting it now is I’m currently working on a new, longer version of this story. This will be version 5.0 and I will post the 1st draft in the next 10 days or so.