Here is the first draft of 3rd (and final?) part of my Marshall series. There is still plenty of work to be done on the series as a whole – new sections to be added to each story, continuity and character inconsistencies to be cleaned up – but I am fairly satisfied that the series has a good enough shape to it now. The next time I revisit this series I will most likely be posting the 2nd drafts of each of the stories. i am still undecided on whether or not to extend to a Part IV.
As always I would love some feedback. This series will form the backbone of the collection of short stories I am putting together and so I would love to have it finished ASAP. (I’m including links to Parts I and II for those who’d like to catch up).
Anyway, enjoy and thanks for reading.
9. Arizona – Marshall Part III (1st Draft)